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WOahhh this is really fucking good, the flow of the whole thing is sick

YE oo wo owoowo!~!@! odw aodo owdo wagsg

Dang that's crazy.

*took a little inspiration from Shadz Backstory*

I feel like for your OC's backstory there could of been like more originally, like come on it's your oc your making something for it ,have something a little different or keep the same structure but put it in a better / different setting, the scene is just a exact copy...
Theres barely anything interesting in it too. very lazy man.

Everything feels so non choreographed it hurts.
Sword swings could use range like last time.
Pretty much everything i said last time.
Also why you crying over shadz giving simple criticism

VixySkunk responds:

Lol i'll never change my style talk more criticize more i don't care.

1.I don't know where the feet are but ok.
2.some of the hands could be higher or at least in a better position,
3.the walking could of have less of a hop next time,
4.sword swing could of like kept going instead of stopping in the air for the grunt to grab it from him..
5.is the agent dead from that one punch???
6. i couldn't really find a story in this.
7. background could of been more creative
8.the abomination i don't get how he just sleeps after tripping slightly.
9.grunt just disappears out of existence at the end not even like a fall just gone.

Next time plan more stuff out, and keep a decent thought through animating your next animation.

VixySkunk responds:

he just faint tbh

yo i atleast i did help ye???

GabrielBarsch responds:

are you kidding?
you're the backbone of the whole thing

DoiCi responds:

I love you , my n word.

yo thats mad funny i'm laughing

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